50 word story – Untitled

And that time she fell, the care they took to get her up again. Those old bones are softer than chalk, they said, but they had held through harder times. With what that man had put her through, at least we were gentle when we lowered her into the ground.

 

 

 

8 Comments Add yours

  1. jmruiz87 says:

    Well now I want more. Who is this woman? What has befallen her? How did she die?

  2. Wow, that hit me. Tragic.

  3. Interesting! See a longer story here.

  4. jilrob says:

    Great 50 word story – you write well! Thanks for visiting me and deciding to follow my blog, Discover Santosha.

  5. Thanks for visiting my blog. I just love your writing. That 50 word story speaks volumes.

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